Sunday, August 29, 2010

Do I have to ?

Because we do it every weekend.
You still didn't tell me why
You are making me nervous
and avid to know why.
Those greener are the same every day
it's boring, annoying, and blindly green.
You make me succumbto come
even though I feel being dragged.
But what made this Sunday extraordinary?
Cool,Crush,Calm
That one tree who made me crazy.
I grimaced after my parents told me we had to go soon.
I just found that sweet cherry tree
who I couldn't ask to get more of.
The wonderful word of my parents
we have to go, now became a  brusque one.
Simple enough they were convinced.
One more hour is what i had.
to eat from the tree.
I finally got the courage to go
and ask that tree
The words came out
like rain from the sky.
But the answer was
I already have a pear.
I thought how could a sweet cherry tree
grow a pear.
But it was simple.
Go and reveal new things kid!

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  1. I love what you are trying to do. Print this out and we can talk about necessary revisions.

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